Soothing Ion

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Posted by admin | Posted in handmade crafts | Posted on 16-04-2009

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NEW Himalayan Rock Lamp Ionicsalt soothing Ion ~ Large NEW Himalayan Rock Lamp Ionicsalt soothing Ion ~ Large
List Price: $79.49
Sale Price: $39.99

Whether you are seeking a decorative devotional collectible for your personal enjoyment, or a very unique gift for those you love, place your orders and you will amazed with our professional service and romantic and unique product! LAMPS come with a deluxe SOLID WOOD BASE...


What is the proper punctuation for this paragraph?

"Encouraging Alina, a startlingly tiny two-year-old with Fetal Alcohol Syndrome, to finish eating her food; helping Ion, a cheerful toddler recovering from heart surgery, to learn how to walk; playing with Sami, a comical little boy with Down syndrome; and trying to soothe Ema-Elena, a beautiful girl afflicted with severe cerebral palsy; all became part of my daily routines, and I quickly got to know the personalities and unique traits of each of the twenty-one children living in the hospital."

I've always been confused as to where to place semicolons and commas.

It is a paragraph with one run on sentence. Not good. make it into 4sentences.

If that is the way it is to be, the punctuation is correct.

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